Wednesday, October 3, 2012


Shanda Watson
Dr. Childs
English 1301
September 28, 2012

Although “My Neighbor Totoro” may appear naïve for some viewers; I presume the movie’s intention was to illustrate benevolence towards others. Hayao Miyazaki did a phenomenal job with promoting a positive message.

            The plot, two adventurous sisters, Satsuki and Mei along with their father; move into a house in the country to be closer to the hospital in which their mother dwells.  Early on Satsuki and Mei gain knowledge of the mysteriously enchanting creatures that live in and around their home.

            I agree with Roger Ebert when he stated, “Here is a children’s film made for the world we should live in, rather than the one we occupy.”

            The movie illustrates a cultivating and gregarious community. Here are some reasons that may help support my point of view. In the beginning while the girls and their father were cleaning and unpacking into their new home we are introduced to an old woman. The old woman is their neighbor who greets the family in a pleasing manner; as she introduces herself to Satsuki and Mei she welcomes them to call her Granny. Shortly after the introduction, Granny immediately assists in household chores, babysitting as well as cooking for the girls.

In a later scene, the younger sister Mei is lost; while trying to follow her older sister to a phone, to check on the well beings of their mother. In no time, a greater number of the community as well as the mysteriously enchanting creatures assist in looking for her. The movie gives a pleasant example of how a community should network in the time of need.

In creating Satsuki, the older sister, Miyazaki did a remarkable job in making her mature, audacious, and compliant; very different from what we perceive with our eyes today. Satsuki, having knowledge of her mother’s illness initiates the responsibility of: combing Mei’s hair and making breakfast for her family, before leaving for school.  There is a scene, in which Mei is taking a nap in the forest and her whereabouts are unknown. Satsuki without hesitation go out and find her.  Satsuki is also very thoughtful of others. One day after walking home from school in the rain; Satsuki unquestionably walk with her younger sister, in the dark, to the bus stop to meet their father with an umbrella, so that he would not get wet.

Miyazaki’s shows off his artistic ability in creating the mysterious enchanting creatures, without using cruelly malicious people, profanity, nudity an physical combat; proves his mastery. Instead we are introduced to a giant, companionable, outgoing creature named Totoro. Allowing this film to be universally appreciated.

5 comments:

  1. Hayao Miyazaki did a phenomenal job with promoting a positive message. This is what you wrote as your thesis for your essay.

    The like that you chose the following examples supported your thesis; When Mei got lost and how her older sister Satsuki and commmunity came together in helping find her. Satsuki without hesitating she went out to find her litle sister.

    I like how you said that Miyazaki did a remarkable job in making her very mature, in how she took care of her sister. By coming her hair and also making breakfast for her little sister and her father. Satsuki had the knowledge to know of her mothers illness nd initiating resposibilities.

    I like that you chose as your source what Roger Ebert stated. Here is a children film made for the world we should live in, rather than the one we occupy.

    I was able to see your thesis and this quote throughoout the essaay.

    I also liked your conclusion in your essay. How you restated everything in your essay in different words. The only thing you forgot was to restate your thesis.

    You made me see this movie in a different way. I liked when you narrated,you made me visualize your thesis. Overall your essay was organized. I was able to follow and understand what you meant when you wrote your thesis.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your paper. You may want to ajust your paragraphs and also restate your thesis at the end.

    Great use of words in the paper and descritions.

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  3. Great job! The thing that I would like to hear more of is sensory detail. It would be the cherry on the sundae

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  4. Your essay is wonderful! I love how it made me see the movie in a different light. It would be nice if you gave a more descriptive detail of the background of the movie, and you may want to re-read your last paragraph. I think you forgot to restate your thesis. Overall the essay has a nice flow. You have definitely persuaded me to see this film through your eyes.

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  5. I like the idea of your paper but I think you need more unity in your paragraph structure.

    Like the second paragraph. it really serves no purpose by itself because it doesn't support you thesis.

    Maybe try combining the 1st 3 short paragraphs into an Intro while still keeping your thesis from the 1st paragraph as the last sentence. You may have to do some rewriting.

    also your 3rd and 4th paragraph are talking about the same thing so also combine them into one paragraph.

    So looks like you will need to make a whole new supporting paragraph for your third main point.

    Also I would expand the final sentence in your conclusion to restate the thesis about the positive message.

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